Psst…I heard a voice say.
I looked but there was no one there.
Psst…there it was again and
again, no one. True, it was soft and had
the soft tones of a woman or maybe a young girl but I distinctly heard it
Yes that was it. It was
the voice a young girl…the voice of my grade school sweetheart. I could see her
face, smell her enticing lilac perfume as she said softly in my ear while
passing me a note…"psst..note coming"…
I remembered the excitement I felt as I opened and read the note…one whole page of X's and 0's…I remembered that we were in love…going to be married…but that was the sixth grade. She moved away that summer and I never saw her again.
I remembered the excitement I felt as I opened and read the note…one whole page of X's and 0's…I remembered that we were in love…going to be married…but that was the sixth grade. She moved away that summer and I never saw her again.
Strange, I thought. This
underground city is really creepy and now I'm hearing things. The tour group had
gone on ahead of me and I moved to catch up.
Psst…I heard it again…"JoAnn?...Is
that you? Where are you?"
"You can't see me. I
can't believe you still recognize me or my voice. It's been so long."
"This is crazy. I
have to be dreaming. I haven't seen or talked to you in twenty years. Why are
you hiding?"
"I'm not hiding. I'm
a Sylph."
"A Sylph? …What is a
Sylph?"
"A person without a
body."
"That's
impossible. How can you be a person
without a body? This had to be a joke."
"No, when I was
sixteen I acquired some kind of somatic nerve disease and I passed away."
"So you're a ghost
or a spirit…right?"
"No, I'm a Sylph.
When I departed your world I was naked and ended up in a seamless void."
"What does naked
have to do with it and what is a seamless voice? Is this a Joke?"
"No, it's true. My
mother brought me to Seattle to some kind of faith healer. She told us that to
be cured we had to pray in this underground city. They tethered my naked body to a pole and
danced around me shaking some kind of potions all over me. Then they left me tethered to the pole until
first light. They said that during the full moon the demons that controlled my
body would leave and I would be cured."
I didn't know what to
say. She was there talking to me or
rather her voice was there but I couldn't see her. I was sure it was some kind
of joke being played by someone from the underground tour. But, how did they
know about JoAnn and her voice?…it was her voice.
I stammered, "That
must have been awful, I'm sorry."
"You needn't be sorry.
You didn't do it to me…they did."
She pointed to a dark
area in the back of the tunnel we were in and I could see four bodies hanging
from a rafter. Their faces were
grotesque and bloated. I gagged and began to wretch.
"That's what I
wanted to tell you. I got away and when they came back, I killed them all. Now,
every night I dance around them and poke them with sticks and throw their own
potions on them."
I could only mutter…"That's
horrible!"
gs batty/for mindlovemisery
Ouch! Not the best choice for a love interest!
ReplyDeleteA lot of people make that same choice.
DeleteWow! Not exactly winning her way back into his heart, is she? This started out as a sweet, sentimental tale, then the train went off the track and over the cliff! Good writing, GS, I love twisted tales! :-)
ReplyDeleteThanks Josie. Always appreciate your comments
DeleteOh wow I loved this! I love how she went all evil at the end, this was fantastic!
ReplyDeleteThanks M...great prompt..lots of fun to try and spin a short tale with that many words and make it have any sense. I enjoyed the challenge.
ReplyDeleteGreat story, and most excellently told!
ReplyDeletethank you Mr. Marbles..appreciate your comment
DeleteDidn't expect the ending! One evil gal that!
ReplyDeleteAnna :o]
sometimes my endings even surprise me...thans
DeleteWell, that's life for you - in the raw and excellently narrated.
ReplyDeleteor death...thanks for the visit
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