silence please


Silence
 my mind
trying to create

Silence
moping grandchildren
upset wife

Silence
an animal being stalked
a boss at raise time

Silence
a query from an agent
a response to my book

Silence
what I asked for
so I could write

Silence
sometimes not good
please...someone...scream at me






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  1. I am not a screamer, but I will say this loudly - very cool take on prompt...do not despair, silence is fleeting...

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    1. thanks joanne...I appreciate your comment.

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  2. As long as there is enough tumult so that no single voice predominates, I can write. Silence is best though; great take on the practicalities of writing.

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    1. thanks Mr. Water..Silence is always good when writing but i doi prefer some nice soothing classical music

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  3. Be careful what you wish for. Will send your 'Hi' on to WS when he arrives home from work.

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    1. is that becareful of the scream or the White Snake?

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  4. I know what you mean. Silence sometime is an ominous sign. It is much easier to deal with the sounds in our life than the silences.

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  5. AAAAAAAUUUUUUUUGGGGGGGGHHHHHHH!!!!!!

    Did that do the trick?

    Well done, Old Grizz!

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    1. Perfect..i was able to add one more line to my novel

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  6. I feel the same way!!! So glad to hear I'm not the only one in a love/hate relationship with silence!! Great one, Grizz!

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    1. thanks Hannah...your visit on the 4th was a big bang for me.

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  7. (sometimes I can't get my comments through so if I ever bomb you all of sudden you'll know and if you don't receive anything I am still here rooting for you in spirit lol)

    I have a 5 year old daughter the only time she isn't talking is when she isn't here! I could use some peace and quiet, lately I have been so distracted its hard to write much less think. Yet when I have been too self-absorbed and my loved ones are rightfully sulking I miss them, without them I'd probably ossify, with them I might go nuts but nuts is a helluva a lot more fun!

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