me

if you would care
to look into the depths
of me

please takes some notes
and tell me
what you see

I get confused
trying to see
what is really me

yesterday and beyond
I thought I was
what I was

and now
looking into the glass
was is not there

but someone
different looks
at me

I hope it it
the person
I've always strived to be

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10 comments:

  1. anthonynorthJuly 04, 2010

    That was great. Reads light but with hidden depths. Enjoyed it.

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  2. samanthawxoJuly 04, 2010

    that was really good! i liked it :)

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  3. Nara MaloneJuly 04, 2010

    Great job imparting how hard it is to see ourselves

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  4. Denise MoncriefJuly 04, 2010

    This was wonderful, well written, and very thought provoking.

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  5. keiths rablingsJuly 04, 2010

    That had me thinking! Excellent.

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  6. Understanding AliceJuly 04, 2010

    its always easier to look from outside of the boat than from in it I think...

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  7. Old EggJuly 04, 2010

    I have that recurring problem each time I look in the mirror. Who is this old man? Where has that ambitious young one gone. Then I see him; it is just an old man trying to be young again.

    Excellent piece.

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  8. Jae RoseJuly 05, 2010

    It's hard to fathom who faces us in the mirror sometimes isn't it?..As long as you know that's all that counts! Thanks as ever for your visit..Jae

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  9. Divaa DivineJuly 05, 2010

    whaoooo - i am scared to look at the depths :(


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  10. linda mayJuly 06, 2010

    Yeah me too Grizz!!!!!

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