panties, wine and sleep

decided to take a shot at the new poetry blog.
objects of imitation
don't know why, but it was fun

wandering through
the silk and satin
these push up that
those cling tightly to it
they lift and firm
what the hell size
does she wear
                                                          gsbatty/2009

no one drinks wine alone
why not
it's my wine
I can do as I please
                                                               gsbatty/2009

asleep on the floor
don't care any more
the dam plane
is stuck
somewhere
                                                               gsbatty/2009

7 comments:

  1. Excellent! I particularly like 'wine'. I'm with you 100%. Cheers!

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  2. I couldn't wait for my Grizz fix. Nice job, I can appreciate the first one. lol

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  3. Yeah...I've been to all these places - spot on!

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  4. These are great each so unique in their intent. I hope it was okay I did one on that blog as well

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  5. I believe that's an open blog that is just starting. I am sure they are happy you contributed.

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  6. email me ya bastard................lmao

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  7. Keith - thanks, your tiem and comment always appreciated.

    Tammy - thanks Grizz fix a little sedate this week

    Stan - will have to do it together sometime. A bottle of wine sitting in an airport with the wrong size panties on our heads.

    Missy - thanks. i can only do open diret poetry.
    I call it skip along with Grizz

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