dare

Dare  walked into the room.  Every head turned her way.  What the hell does she want?  No one invited her and she sure as hell wasn't wanted.  She could only mean trouble for all concerned.  She moved slowly forward.  Every man held his breath.  Some turned their heads away like they did way back in grade school.  If they did not look at her then maybe she would not touch them.  Her touch was sure death.  She moved closer.  Her walk was more of a glide and she seemed to float as she moved towards them. She moved towards the left side of the room and the men on the right breathed a sigh of relief.  To bad for the guy she chose.  That was his problem.  This was no time to be hero.  They usually put a hero's medal on his coffin, not his chest.  She stopped in front of the town drunk who was surprisingly sober right then.  A cold chill ran down his spine but he didn't shiver.  He did not want them to know how afraid he was.  It did not matter that they all had the same fear.  He would not shame himself.  From somewhere he found the courage he had lost as a young man,  He stood tall and looked her straight in the eye.  Her eyes were blue and cold as steel.  Her lips thin and hard.  She reached out to touch him.  He was the one she had chosen.  He did not cower or flinch.  His eyes became hard and he actually made her stop and step back.  Dare became unsure of herself.  No one had challenged her before.  They knew the possible outcome but this man, this drunk who she was sent to take, had changed. He was no longer a drunk.  He was a man again and a man to be feared.  A man that can conquer his inner devils was not one she wanted to challenge.  She dared not touch him.  She turned and walked away.

15 comments:

  1. He'll be sorry when he gets back home to her...!

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  2. What an awesome viewpoint. Really enjoyed this! Very unique.

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  3. Intriguing and amazing that the drunk found the courage. I think I have twisted my brain conjuring up the situation!

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  4. I like her. I just finished a book about someone almost similar, but her name was Kyra. :)

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  5. I'm sure I've met her! Creepy!

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  6. I love your take on the word Dare! you brought her to life! how cool!
    well done :)
    peace

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  7. This idea of yours is exceptional, OG. Well written, very powerful. The least expected one, the least expected reaction, so much at work here that everyone learned, everyone was changed.

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  8. In conquering his own demons he put on armor and became impervious to miss dare, miss double dawg dare! Yep, he fought the real battle, she was just playing!

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  9. Very live character....good read.

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  10. G'Day Grizz, just dropping by to say Happy New Year to you mate. Cheers. Hope you and yours enjoyed the season.

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  11. Hey Grizz. This week's prompt up at Inkwelldrops. Would love to read your story

    http://storyteller0001.blogspot.com/

    Cheers
    Pisku

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  12. Got the link wrong. The correct one is here

    http://inkwelldrops.blogspot.com/

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  13. Grizz where ave you been? Are you O.K.?

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