tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5553591345131503809.post859028629808359773..comments2023-05-12T08:04:43.496-07:00Comments on Tales by Old Grizz: blueGeorge S Battyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15407137341843413701noreply@blogger.comBlogger24125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5553591345131503809.post-78602336550517505422009-08-30T17:25:10.332-07:002009-08-30T17:25:10.332-07:00she was wild, I was shy...Oh Grizz, sounded doomed...she was wild, I was shy...Oh Grizz, sounded doomed. she stayed long as she could, then took her free spirit off to another atmosphere, leaving you blue - I would totally open up a can of whoop-ass on her for you but she would be hard to catch as a hummingbird :)Dee Martinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05077141911351737390noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5553591345131503809.post-37940223634011898342009-08-30T16:08:33.729-07:002009-08-30T16:08:33.729-07:00I prefer being one, I've realized, only after ...I prefer being one, I've realized, only after having experienced being two.Patois42https://www.blogger.com/profile/07764936858778730692noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5553591345131503809.post-2027751518311905712009-08-30T12:18:36.802-07:002009-08-30T12:18:36.802-07:00well, there you go.well, there you go.quin brownehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09804746948797234402noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5553591345131503809.post-25996198513881532432009-08-30T05:12:08.381-07:002009-08-30T05:12:08.381-07:00Love how the cycle of poetic justice turns!Love how the cycle of poetic justice turns!Gemma Wisemanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17466540188839321484noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5553591345131503809.post-41007769852138849922009-08-29T22:05:04.368-07:002009-08-29T22:05:04.368-07:00Can't beat life experience for a writing promp...Can't beat life experience for a writing prompt eh Grizz. I hope you didn't have your heart broked though. Excellent.linda mayhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17426368991644308588noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5553591345131503809.post-2591510792754460792009-08-29T20:09:15.587-07:002009-08-29T20:09:15.587-07:00Oh, I really, really like that! The effect of the...Oh, I really, really like that! The effect of the shifts, the turning of the tides, blue and lost, lost and the blue. Very cool, Grizz : )missalisterhttp://missalister.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5553591345131503809.post-16180271820522755342009-08-29T19:50:27.906-07:002009-08-29T19:50:27.906-07:00Beautiful! You captured the relationship gone wron...Beautiful! You captured the relationship gone wrong perfectly.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5553591345131503809.post-10517960675575572232009-08-29T12:20:41.789-07:002009-08-29T12:20:41.789-07:00You said it perfectly
Love found
Love lost
Blue
Li...You said it perfectly<br />Love found<br />Love lost<br />Blue<br />Life goes on!<br /><br />bbhttp://torristravels.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5553591345131503809.post-13204002269183347592009-08-29T10:53:32.225-07:002009-08-29T10:53:32.225-07:00Beautiful. I really liked this.<i>Beautiful</i>. I really liked this.Weronika Janczukhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02578288655500573458noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5553591345131503809.post-7678215668314445522009-08-29T10:08:43.359-07:002009-08-29T10:08:43.359-07:00Nicely written buddy.Nicely written buddy.cyclopsevenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11440123931878867581noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5553591345131503809.post-22825349885558115552009-08-29T09:14:06.706-07:002009-08-29T09:14:06.706-07:00i like the beginning and end. seems like a familia...i like the beginning and end. seems like a familiar story.floretahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18220834824793299258noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5553591345131503809.post-74387245764270290252009-08-29T08:23:51.881-07:002009-08-29T08:23:51.881-07:00Selma - I always enjoy your comments-thanks
Desi -...Selma - I always enjoy your comments-thanks<br />Desi - thank you appreciated<br />Mr. North - a great comment from the master<br />gautami - thank you<br />mz mouthy - nice to have you back. loved the dod story<br />sweetest - thank you<br /><br />to all who spent some time with me, I truly appreciate you. Poetry is not my forte and to get favorable comments is truly gratifying.<br />All who have visited me this day are very good writers and truly honor me by stopping in.George S Battyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15407137341843413701noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5553591345131503809.post-23529376028963615822009-08-29T08:23:29.242-07:002009-08-29T08:23:29.242-07:00Touching!!!Touching!!!Jeeveshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02059095696768768954noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5553591345131503809.post-27805252660225772552009-08-29T07:22:36.782-07:002009-08-29T07:22:36.782-07:00Hello! We invite you to contribute to our new poet...Hello! We invite you to contribute to our new poetry blog: <a href="http://objectsofimitation.blogspot.com" rel="nofollow">objects of imitation</a>objects of imitationhttp://objectsofimitation.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5553591345131503809.post-90208042322892079512009-08-29T06:55:45.454-07:002009-08-29T06:55:45.454-07:00This was so touching and sad...they came full circ...This was so touching and sad...they came full circle. Simply beautiful...Sherri B.https://www.blogger.com/profile/00834386300886224116noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5553591345131503809.post-26271002844074566752009-08-29T05:30:58.094-07:002009-08-29T05:30:58.094-07:00wonderful grizz! and a beautiful flow my dear. j...wonderful grizz! and a beautiful flow my dear. just beautiful!a mouthy irish woman? ridiculous!https://www.blogger.com/profile/10559289518691894880noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5553591345131503809.post-34473568785279573322009-08-29T02:37:34.738-07:002009-08-29T02:37:34.738-07:00The simplicity enhances the feeling..
weeks tramp...The simplicity enhances the feeling..<br /><br /><a href="http://firmlyrooted.blogspot.com/2009/08/weeks-trample-on-each-other-like.html" rel="nofollow">weeks trample on each other like magazines</a>gautami tripathyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04192356825699543613noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5553591345131503809.post-65553889401333138152009-08-29T01:37:06.415-07:002009-08-29T01:37:06.415-07:00Some great word play here. An excellent job.Some great word play here. An excellent job.anthonynorthhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06680944720744601697noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5553591345131503809.post-47769523122475350852009-08-29T01:07:23.023-07:002009-08-29T01:07:23.023-07:00my o my this is just divine :)
My Sunday Poetrymy o my this is just divine :)<br /><br /><a href="http://whenhekissesher.wordpress.com/2009/08/29/untamed-fantasy" rel="nofollow">My Sunday Poetry</a>Americanising Desihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04089753612782157378noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5553591345131503809.post-75899112140563982122009-08-28T23:03:24.291-07:002009-08-28T23:03:24.291-07:00I like the wordplay here. Very well done.I like the wordplay here. Very well done.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5553591345131503809.post-27203391840759578552009-08-28T22:24:28.242-07:002009-08-28T22:24:28.242-07:00Granny - always an honor when you drop in. thanks...Granny - always an honor when you drop in. thanksGeorge S Battyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15407137341843413701noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5553591345131503809.post-33842283621290411572009-08-28T21:55:16.075-07:002009-08-28T21:55:16.075-07:00This is so sad! I guess I was hoping for a happy ...This is so sad! I guess I was hoping for a happy ending. A very interesting use of inverted couplets.Granny Smithhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18214748856516412924noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5553591345131503809.post-35598108743537248092009-08-28T21:52:52.148-07:002009-08-28T21:52:52.148-07:00Lucy - thanks, your thoughts are always kindLucy - thanks, your thoughts are always kindGeorge S Battyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15407137341843413701noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5553591345131503809.post-2664918822017270152009-08-28T20:00:43.919-07:002009-08-28T20:00:43.919-07:00bittersweet and written so creatively!
i really e...bittersweet and written so creatively! <br />i really enjoyed this GrizzLucyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11442070518518821892noreply@blogger.com